SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Preparing for war

I like it, the last sentence gives it a very strange twist. I have to think about it a little more...

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Well, well... Glad you liked it! I reckon one can interpret the last sentence in any way one wants to."

Yes, it is very thought provoking... good job

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Thanks!"

what you call that a work of literature anybody to write something that short with exception of a third grader i would laugh in there face.but with it stunk so bad i used a half bottle of air freshner around my pc when i was done reading this.i now feel like my IQ has dropped 20 points and i feel dumber thanks a lot!!!!!you really know how to bore someone to death.it is sad that my excerpt is more interresting than your poem!!!!!!!!!ahahahaaahhhhahhahhahhahahhahhahahhahah but dont worry ill remember this literature forever,everytime i drop the kids off a the pool and wait for the whirlpool ahahaahphphphpphphphphpphphpphp pee you

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Well, what can I say? You don't have to like my poems, that's perfectly OK with me. But there's no reason to be rude. I would like some constructive critics, instead of this pile of rubbish."

Okay...I LOVED this poem...it was good and the last line made it funny ^_^ *gives cookies*

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Thank you very much! I had forgotten about this page, it was so very long ago I logged in last time."

LOL. That was great man.

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Thanks!"

I don't particularly care for haikus in general, but this was great! You can imagine some general facing this gigantic army and then thinking . . . I did give *my* army there orders, right?

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "*smiles* Thanks, Kathryn! That's exactly the image I had in my head when writing this poem."

Hmmm.. how very interesting. i’m a poet myself, though not much into Haiku’s, but i really like yours. you have a very clear imagination! ^^ I’m also writing a story, i havnt posted it yet though...all my books are fantasy! (well, the two i’m writing at least)

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Thanks! I wrote this a very long time ago. I haven’t been online here for a while. "

That was good, funny, I pictured this massive fleet and an army below gathering for a titanic battle, and then someone goes... wait a tic, where’s the enemy? And everyone packs up and goes home... nicely done =)

S. Johan Nilsson replies: "Thanks! Glad you liked it!"